Inevitably, at some point or
another in your songwriting career, you will be asked to give a critique of another
songwriter's work. Here are a few guidelines you can follow to help make the process of
critiquing a song go as smoothly as possible.
Don't
give a critique unless you're asked for it. It's unprofessional to
critique a song or offer suggestions on its re-writing unless you've been asked by the
writer to do so. Even if you know exactly what's wrong with the song, the songwriter may
have already had the song critiqued and demoed. Your "critique" would probably
only frustrate the songwriter.
What are the writer's objectives? A songwriter's objectives can
have a tremendous impact on how the song should be critiqued. A song written by a husband
for his wife's birthday, or someone who writes strictly as a hobby need not be judged by
the same commercial standards as a song written by a writer who wants to get it recorded
by Tim McGraw. Also, potential songwriting artists have slightly more freedom in their
writing style since they don't need to write songs other people will record - they'll
record their own.
Listen
to how the song makes you feel. Your initial reaction to the song is
probably the most important. If you concentrate on analyzing the song, you may lose the
feel of it. Do you feel like dancing? crying? laughing? Your
songwriting instincts will guide you toward the proper critique. If you felt like turning
the song off, maybe it took too long to get to the chorus.
Always
acknowledge the positive first. Before pointing out any flaws in the
song, point out the song's strengths. Many people are so eager to offer advice on how to
correct the song's shortcomings that they neglect to say anything good about the song.
Immediately launching into what the songwriter could've done better places the writer on
the defensive. It also makes it less likely that any advice you give will be listened to
or well received.
Identify
the central problem. When you are ready to discuss potential
weaknesses in the song be specific. It's important not to generalize, but to point toward
specific problems the songwriter can address in rewriting. Avoid statements such as,
"I didn't like the feel of the song" or "the chorus didn't work for
me". Instead, try to use constructive criticism based on principles of solid
songwriting craftsmanship - "I felt the song could use more contrast in the
chorus", or "I felt like three verses before the first choruse may have been too
many".
Be
helpful rather than hurtful. Choose your language carefully when
critiquing a song. Criticism doesn't mean making the songwriter feel bad about themselves.
A statement like, "your song isn't memorable enough" immediately puts the writer
on the defensive. Instead, try to word criticism so that it clearly reflects this is your
opinion. Again, try to be specific. Use statements such as, "I felt like there needed
to be more repetition in the chorus" or "I wanted the melody to go higher in the
chorus". When offering suggestions, use language such as "you might want to try
another chord in place of the flat seven chord in the verse".
Hope to see you on the
charts.

Danny
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